Excerpt from The Rebel's Kiss: Sarah declares her independence

One of my favorite passages from The Rebel's Kiss (my current WIP) is the scene where Sarah declares her independence. Sarah is the daughter of a prominent Loyalist. Lt. Richardson is an English officer - and as you'll probably be able to tell from this excerpt, not the hero in this story.


Moments later an affronted Richardson strode into the room. "What is so bloody urgent that you would call me away from the officer's club just when I was about to sit down to supper? You should
take more care of your reputation. Your actions reflect poorly on me."
            Beneath her calm exterior, Sarah seethed. It had been half past five when sent the note. How was it her fault that it had taken nearly four hours to locate him? Or that he ate his supper at such a late hour? And, it wasn’t as if the note had said there was an emergency. She had just requested he come at his earliest convenience. If he didn’t find nine o’clock convenient, he should not have come.  
His arrogance made her next words almost pleasurable. "I cannot marry you."
            Richardson looked down his considerable nose at her. "Why ever not?
            "I do not love you."
            He snorted. "Do not be absurd. Love has nothing to do with marriage."
            Of course, it didn't. Sarah knew that. But, right at this moment, love seemed to be the most important ingredient in the world to a successful marriage. Of course, Richardson would never see things her way.
            "I understand that, but it is important to me. And, if I mean anything to you, you will respect my feelings."
            "You are such a child. Sit down and let's talk about this like reasonable adults."
            Sarah hesitated a moment but decided not to poke the beast. The lieutenant was sounding almost reasonable. And, if he was reasonable...She took a seat on the settee.
            "You must think of marriage like the relationship between England and her colonies," Richardson began.
            Sarah’s eyebrows rose. "And… you would be England, Lieutenant?"
            "Naturally. It is my duty to protect you, to keep you clothed and fed. It is your duty to obey me and to be the mother to future generations of Englishmen. Together we will be a stronger force. One that does honor to our family name and our country."
            His impromptu speech, if it was impromptu, sounded more like one he might use to rally the troops, not to convince to his future bride.
            "I take it England does not love her colonies any more than her colonies love England?" Sarah asked, wondering if the lieutenant would fully grasp the meaning behind her question.
            "Of course not. Why should she? Whether the colonies love England is of little matter either. They have a duty to their mother country. Without her, they would not have survived this long in this savage land."
            Sarah stood. "Why, Lieutenant, I never knew you were such a romantic. However, this colony is declaring independence. Surely, there are others who are eager to be subjugated by you."
            "Y...Y..You cannot declare independence!" Richardson sputtered, his face turning purple.
            At the sound of his raised voice, Jake and Howie appeared at the library door, their dark eyes watching the lieutenant's every move. Sarah was glad her father had left them behind for once.
            "Why not?"
            "Because you are a colony. It is in your nature to be submissive."
            His voice was lower than before, but the dogs still shifted their front paws restlessly.         
            "My nature? You evidently do not know me any more than you know my fellow countrymen whom you so easily dismiss."
            "You will learn to submit." He grabbed her forearm, and a low rumble emanated from Jake's chest.
            The lieutenant dropped her arm, and Jake's growling faded away.
            "So if I am not willingly submissive, you will force me to be so."
            "If necessary, yes. It is for your own good. You have repeatedly demonstrated that you have no regard for your own safety and no sense of decorum."
            "What do you mean?" She could not truthfully deny that she had been somewhat lacking in both as of late.
            "You were with him, weren't you?"
            "Who?" Sarah asked, though she had a sinking feeling that the lieutenant knew more than she had given him credit for.
            "Jack Garrett."
            So that was his full name. It was a nice name. How odd that, before now, she had simply thought of him as ‘Jack’ without reservation when calling any other man by his Christian name would have seemed highly improper. More evidence for her lack of decorum, no doubt.

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